For Alchemia

[themostepotente]

Little unsure on this. If anyone sees correcting, let me know! Trying to vastly improve the German.

Her drabble -- Severus Snape/Harry Potter

Not here, the boy gasps, they’ll hear.

Can’t Wait.

Lips against lips, tongue against tongue, hands trailing down...

Oh God!

Hush boy.

Can’t.

He pulls off his scarf, presses it into the boy’s mouth, and wraps it around, snug.

Hush boy.

The translation

Nicht hier, keucht der Junge, sie werden uns hören.

Kann nicht warten.

Lippen an Lippen, Zunge an Zunge, Hände, die hinuntergleiten...

Oh Gott!

Sei still, Junge.

Ich kann nicht.

Er nimmt seinen Schal ab, drückt ihn dem Jungen in den Mund und wickelt ihn fest.

Still, Junge.

ETA: Many thanks to kaysha for betaing my German.

Comments

[lrodell.livejournal.com]

ScarfSex!
=D

[kaysha.livejournal.com]

Ohhhhh! Heh! Uhhhm, I'll "beta" the translation a bit, alright? :)

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"Nicht hier," keucht der Junge, "sie werden uns hören."

Kann nicht warten.

Lippen an Lippen, Zunge an Zunge, Hände, die hinuntergleiten.

Oh Gott!

Sei still, Junge.

Ich kann nicht.

Er nimmt seinen Schal ab, drückt ihn dem Jungen in den Mund und wickelt ihn fest.

Still, Junge.
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Ahhh, and now back to asldaslkdjfsffjasd WORK! (You didn't see me, you did absolutely NOT see me! Because I'm a good student! I did NOT take a peek at my flist!!!)

[saladbats.livejournal.com]

German AND a scarf as a gag....you are trying to kill me, aren't you?
*smirk*

[flimpy.livejournal.com]

Fdgsdfjkl;adf YOWZA. *Fans self*

Wunderbar!

[gothikmaus.livejournal.com]

Oh, wow. This is the first time I've read Snape/Harry in German. Und es war schööön! =D

Sorry, but it's Monday morning and far too early for any kind of coherent comment. =P

[tipgardner.livejournal.com]

Translating tics asside, Snape shushing a lover in German is teh HAWT. This is great stuff. And the scarf...holy palomino!

[alchemia.livejournal.com]

i cant believe i almost missed this, didn't recognise the title. i can't read german but it LOOKS cool =) thanks!