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Keeper of the Superfluous Es! ([personal profile] themostepotente) wrote2009-07-29 08:14 am

Ficlet: Chrysalis - Snape/Cormac (Hard R)

Title: Chrysalis
Author: [livejournal.com profile] themostepotente
Word Count: 250 words
Rating: Hard R
Pairing: Snape/Cormac
Warnings: Chan (Cormac is 16)
Disclaimer: Not my sandbox, I just like to play in it.
Summary: Slughorn wasn't the only collector of gifted students.
Author's Notes: There was a cry for Snape/McLaggen fic (particularly because he's a lot hotter in the movie than he was in the book) of the detention sort, and lo, I stepped up to the challenge. Beta read over the phone by Veni, so if there are any mistakes, please to be telling me.




Chrysalis



Snape's seen a lot of students come and go in his fifteen-year tenure.

He observes every one, and like Slughorn, he's just as practised a collector, albeit sub rosa.

Every year, a pretty young thing makes himself known. This year it's a Gryffindor, in a league for once Potter's not privy to.

Cormac McLaggen's a looker, all fair-haired and dark-eyed. Sometimes, he has a march like a tin soldier, tall and proud and purposeful. Other times, he has a strut, cool and cutting, and Snape envies the way the crowds part before McLaggen, the Alexander to his barbarian hordes.

But Snape particularly notes the flit, the agile butterfly not so easily snared by conventional means. Detention makes for a fine net, he muses.

No lines are given. No cauldrons need scrubbing. But Snape's punishments are arduous and there are harsh lessons to be learnt.

McLaggen looks thoroughly despoiled, cock spent and face awash in the simpering moonlight. Foolish, foolish boy Snape says aloud, and he does not feel the burn of cigarette underneath his bare toes.

How tragic the mothman despises the chrysalis, Snape with his nocturnal ways and his attraction to the light, the butterfly that never was.

Snape crawls back into bed, his body still sleep-warm and his prick mad-hard. Mclaggen's legs part instantly, the poor, little wing-clipped whore.

Pin me to the bed. Pin me as a needlepoint would pierce its butterfly. They are the boy's words, and they are perfect.

And with a lust driven push Snape whispers, One more for the killing jar.

End

[identity profile] marguerite-26.livejournal.com 2009-07-29 12:42 pm (UTC)(link)
SQUEEEEE!!!!!!

That was delish! I want to see the movie now, just to get a picture of this Cormac. ♥

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2009-07-29 12:47 pm (UTC)(link)
Ha ha - you are adorable, m'dear *♥ back*

Want an idea of what movie!McLaggen looks like? Picture Ryan Phillipe. They could be twins. Or identical cousins :P

[identity profile] the-flic.livejournal.com 2009-07-29 12:55 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooooh this was delish and yummy, I love very much!! Great new pairing I hope to read more of!

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2009-07-30 12:30 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you kindly, Ms Flic ♥ ♥ I'm very happy to hear that you enjoyed this. It's so good to be writing somewhat steadily again. Who knows, maybe there'll be more Snormac (yes, I really did call it that :P) soon. *G*

[identity profile] asnowyowl.livejournal.com 2009-07-29 01:18 pm (UTC)(link)
I love Snape as the collector.Awesome!

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2009-07-30 12:34 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, hon :-) I'm really glad that Snape as the collector worked for you. Sluggy shouldn't have all the fun, eh? <3 <3 <3

[personal profile] snegurochka_lee 2009-07-29 01:44 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooh, lovely! I like the "collector" motif, with Snape ensnaring this hot young thing. :)

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2009-07-30 12:32 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, m'dear! See what lovely filth you inspire?

ext_6368: cherry blossoms on a tree -- with my fandom name "EntreNous" on it (hp: snape smacks ron)

[identity profile] entrenous88.livejournal.com 2009-07-29 03:05 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooooh, yum! I love whorish!McLaggen sooo much!

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2009-07-30 12:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, sweetie ♥ Snape likes his whorish!McLaggen, too. *G*

[identity profile] snarkyscorp.livejournal.com 2009-07-29 03:37 pm (UTC)(link)
.....asfdksdfafjkhsfsafsdfjkshfasf. *flaildie*

More. There must be more. I demand it. D:

So good. So so good. Words are failing. So hot. Snape. Prick. WORDS. Guh.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2009-07-30 12:43 pm (UTC)(link)
BEST ♥ COMMENT ♥ EVER ♥

I wanted to make this longer. Really, I did, but I porned my [livejournal.com profile] hp_sas fic so much, I depleted my stocks :P LOL

We'll see if I can't get to this pairing again sometime soon. Movie!Cormac was too hot for words. *G*
arcanetrivia: a light purple swirl on a darker purple background (severus smex (kinda sexy))

[personal profile] arcanetrivia 2009-07-29 07:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Ooooh.... *purrrrrr* The last two lines, ohmygod.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2009-07-30 12:27 pm (UTC)(link)
Yay! I'm really glad you liked this, hon. Makes me all blushity 'n stuff ♥
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[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2009-07-30 12:25 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much!!! I'm so glad those last lines worked for you <3 <3 <3

Also, your icon rocks so hard!

[identity profile] melusinahp.livejournal.com 2009-07-29 09:26 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love that final line. Gorgeous imagery in this one, lovely.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2009-07-30 12:23 pm (UTC)(link)
*snuzzes* Thank you, sweetie ♥ ♥ ♥

I kinda wrote this with you in mind.

[identity profile] secretsolitaire.livejournal.com 2009-07-30 01:48 am (UTC)(link)
Oooh, great imagery!

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2009-07-30 12:21 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks hon ♥ Glad you enjoyed the imagery :-)

[identity profile] cassandra-leeds.livejournal.com 2009-10-27 06:59 am (UTC)(link)
I love when a fic makes me say "Wow!" outloud. That was incredible. Those last couple lines were killer.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2009-10-27 10:37 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much! This was an enjoyable experiment. I'm so glad to hear that those last few lines worked so well for you :-)