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Keeper of the Superfluous Es! ([personal profile] themostepotente) wrote2005-08-23 06:07 pm

Il Violino Rosso (Lucius/Severus -- R)

Title: Il Violino Rosso (The Red Violin)
Rating: R
Pairing(s): Lucius/Severus -- implied Severus/?
Warnings: A bit o' bloodplay, violence and gore, dark!ficcy
Disclaimer: Oh, so not mine -- this market's been cornered.
Summary: Lucius knows just how to punish Severus for his indiscretions.
Author notes: Written for [livejournal.com profile] underlucius. Crossposted here to [livejournal.com profile] hp_literotica.

Many thanks go to [livejournal.com profile] sinick for betaing.



Il Violino Rosso


Lucius Malfoy has only ever placed his trust in one man. Only ever confessed his secrets to one man. Only ever respected one man. And only ever loved one man. Such degrees of fondness were never easy for Lucius to allow, for he was not in the slightest a generous man.

Severus Snape, however, was able to chisel past the icy bleakness of his heart. This man was neither angel nor demon, but he commanded the forces of dark and light with his silver tongue and his mesmeric play. It was said his bow strokes could inspire the most downtrodden men into battle, sway the most unbending ears, and of course, lead an unwilling man to love.

But what a fool Lucius has been, blinded by treachery and duplicitous nature. Severus is his mirror reflection, and still he could not see past the lies and the deceit. It provokes in him another, stronger love: a love of vengeance. No man will have the better of Lucius without greater retribution. No man. Not even the man with whom he has shared a part of his life, a piece of his soul, and the whole of his heart.

Over time, Lucius unearths Severus's greatest weaknesses: failure and the inability to create with his hands. He knows with Severus there is no resisting what has been given him to see, touch, and feel.

Lucius scours the conservatories of Venice for the ideal violin, one that has been passed from virtuoso to virtuoso since its creation. It is perfect in a way that most would consider imperfect: a damaged scroll, a time-weathered body, and poorly tightened tuning pegs from which the strings have snapped. Despite its abysmal condition, Lucius declines the services of the luthier. Only he will be able to restore the Stradivarius to playing condition.

Lucius begins the arduous process by restaining the belly. Once the colour of burnished carmine, he surmises that the only way to regain the once lustrous sheen is through blood. He will take his ceremonial athame in hand and cut scissures into the pallid flesh of his Narcissa's arm. Brilliant, shining blood that breathes life into deadened, russet heartwood. Lucius doesn't like hurting her, but if he's been made to suffer than everyone else around him should be made to suffer as well.

Next, he restrings the violin with sinew from a recent kill. The sinew is entwined with sisal and catgut, strong and taut, because Lucius knows that Severus plays like he makes love; he is rough but loving. The strings are wound around pincer-shaped tuning pegs, and the traditional spiralled scroll is now the segmented arc of a scorpion's tail. Lucius finds that this is a fitting representation of his lover, both potent and poisonous.

He saves the bow for last; the back is ornately carved with the bodies of both incubus and succubus on opposite ends conjoined at the waist. Horsehair is replaced with locks of his own hair, golden silk that will catch the light with Severus's mad-passionate sautillé strokes. Lucius will lubricate the bow hairs with the tears of his newborn son. Tears he has never been able to cry for himself, for he has long since stoppered his hurt and his anger with emotional detachment and liaisons of his own.

Il Violino Rosso is now something more than it ever was. It is an instrument of beauty and torture. Lucius has only now to bestow it upon its rightful possessor.




"Play for me," Lucius orders. He looks quite kingly sitting in his chair with Severus before him, a proper recitalist, violin in one hand, bow in the other.

Severus starts to protest. Insists he is not worthy of such a handsome violin.

"Ah, but you are, Severus. In fact, no one is better suited to this violin than you are. Play." Lucius's last word is final. He is the sinecurist and what is Severus but an adulterer in dire need of reminding?

What Severus plays is not what he intends. It is practically unrecognisable and undoubtedly ear splitting. He is surprised when Lucius does not flinch. It is almost as though this cacophony were expected. He bows sul ponticello and sul tasto, but there is no distinction. Everything he plays sounds amateurish, and his apologies equally so.

And then Severus is told why.

"For every lie, for every indiscretion you have lost a note of your playing. It will take you twice as long to relearn what you have so shamelessly squandered."

Severus denies the allegations, but his falsehoods are as diaphanous as spider-spun gossamer. Any further efforts to thwart Lucius's anger are met with insults.

Lucius is all smiles having trapped his little fly in a web of deceit, but he couldn't be angrier. "Keep the violin," he says, "as a consolation prize."

Severus manages a weak goodbye and excuses himself before he's dismissed. Just as he's about to leave, Lucius tells him something he's already felt in the pit of his stomach since he first arrived.

"That good for nothing Regulus was just as useless in life as he was in death. You'll still be able to stroke him, though; just in different ways."

That winter, Severus gave up the violin.

Fin

[identity profile] underlucius.livejournal.com 2005-08-23 10:36 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow. What a fantastic gift. Am Stunned. Truly.

What amazes me, TMP, is the depth of your knowledge when you do a subject. I live for the day when you write original novels, because you will be able to write the BEST gothic or the most fantastic mythology, or detective stories, because of the painstaking research you must do, and then transcribe it effortlessly onto the page.

That aside, I loved the vengeance behind this, and the slow subtle way that Lucius (obviously a Scorpio, and if JKR ever refutes that I shall burn my HP books) plans the plan.

Gorgeous, utterly gorgeous. Thank you so much!

Now cross post! Shoo!

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-23 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Well, I'm a horror/sci-fi writer by instinct. Something like this just comes natural.

Original fic? Not my calling. Just not good enough.

I'm so glad you liked this, J. It was written with your tastes and our boys in mind.

*snogs*

[identity profile] leatherdykeuk.livejournal.com 2005-08-23 11:11 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, that was good. So perfect in detail, and such a twist at the end.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-23 11:51 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I'm really glad you liked it :-)

[identity profile] amanuensis1.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 12:01 am (UTC)(link)
Ooooh! Is this anything to do with the film The Red Violin? I've never seen it but it's one of those films everyone tells me I need to see; I was wondering if you drew on that source for this.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 12:22 am (UTC)(link)
In part, yes. You've never seen? I enjoyed it, though I found Samuel L. Jackson's presense a tad misplaced.

I've been on a real Snucius kick lately where I'm a big meanyhead to one or both. I don't suppose you've seen this A Blow to His Ego (http://www.livejournal.com/users/themostepotente/85041.html#cutid1)?

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[identity profile] ariadneelda.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 12:07 am (UTC)(link)
The ending. The ending OMG. What a fabulous, chilling twist. My jaw literally dropped; I was so engrossed in the beauty of your writing I'd forgotten all about the implied second pairing. I should've paid more attention to that "recent kill".

I loved the meticulous, ruthless way Lucius planned his vengeance. Always love all the detail you put into your stories. It gives them depth, making them stand out. This was truly remarkable.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 12:24 am (UTC)(link)
Aria, m'dear -- you are far too good to me. Your praise of my mediocre fic writing skills warms the cockles of my black heart.

*snuzzes*

[identity profile] viverra-libro.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 12:41 am (UTC)(link)
Wow. What an intense tale. Every line was amazing.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 12:45 am (UTC)(link)
Why thank you! *blushes furiously*

[identity profile] shikishi.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 02:07 am (UTC)(link)
Hmmm.. lovely imagery there. Yes. Indeed.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 04:54 am (UTC)(link)
Your comment went MIA for like four hours, man. I kept bitching to Julie about it :P

Anyway...

I'm really glad you liked this, hon. Makes for a happy Penny :-)

*gnaws*

[identity profile] inell.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 04:48 am (UTC)(link)
As always, you've created a masterpiece. Everything you write (whether it's crackfic or regular) is always so beautiful and such lovely word use and imagery. *fangirls*

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 04:57 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, Inell.

You don't know how grateful I am for your praise and enthusiasm.

*hugs*

[identity profile] anjenue.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 04:49 am (UTC)(link)
OMFG, Penny, this is...gaaaaahhhh. You know how I love your descriptions, your language, the flow of your stories, and gaaahhh the darkness underlying all of it, the meticulousness of Lucius' work and the real loving joy he takes in it is...ngh. Love this. So so so much.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 05:04 am (UTC)(link)
Anj, thank you so so much. I don't think you realize what an inspiration you are to me.

Seeing your comment though really fills my heart with joy.

Thank you! *snogs*

[identity profile] xylodemon.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 04:55 am (UTC)(link)
I didn't tell you this on the phone, but I have THE BIGGEST KINK for musicporn.

Particularly violinporn.

This is awesome. You are awesome.

OMG Regulus.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 05:05 am (UTC)(link)
Ditto on the violin porn.

Thank you, sweets. Love you muchly :-)

[identity profile] warped-factor.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 08:38 am (UTC)(link)
OMG, eeek! That ending. *shudders* This was beautiful in a deliciously horrible way! Loved Lucius's careful revenge, and all the details. Do you know the violin, or did you research?

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 10:14 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm a musician, but I play the drums. I shy away from stringed instruments even though I own a Fender Strat.

Research, baby! It's all about the research. *G*

[identity profile] athenakt.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 02:53 pm (UTC)(link)
Oh, I love the horror angst! A lovely touch of ViolinPlayer!Snape always warms me. To use it as the instrument of Lucius' vengeance in such a manner... words fail me.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-24 10:14 pm (UTC)(link)
I've a real kink for violinplaying!Snape. *G*

Good to see I'm not alone :-)

[identity profile] sappybeaver.livejournal.com 2005-08-25 02:33 am (UTC)(link)
Gawd was that incredible! I would have to agree with the general consensus that you should do ORIGINAL fic but DAMN the writing you already do is pure genius! Your stories absolutely titillate me!

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-25 08:01 am (UTC)(link)
OMG, Jan, when did you leave this? Please tell me you didn't while I was sound asleep on your couch :P

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[identity profile] iulia_linnea.livejournal.com 2005-08-25 04:27 am (UTC)(link)
Fuck.

This is devastating.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-25 08:06 am (UTC)(link)
No happy endings with Snucius, man.

Devastating's good. I like devastating. *G*

[identity profile] soberloki.livejournal.com 2005-08-25 06:03 am (UTC)(link)
Holy hell.

That winter, Severus gave up the violin.

*wails*

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-25 08:10 am (UTC)(link)
I'll have him play the piano next. *G*

Thanks for reading :-)

[identity profile] happiestwhen.livejournal.com 2005-08-26 07:43 am (UTC)(link)
Eee! You've made making a violin sound so sexy. And the ending! I didn't expect that!

Absolutely rich and lovely. ♥

Now, you mentioned something about a piano? >_>

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-26 09:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, Snoy love :-)

Piano smut, eh? I think I can manage two boys and a Bõsendorfer. *G*

[identity profile] fiendling.livejournal.com 2005-08-27 05:55 am (UTC)(link)
woah, the end
dude, this was excellent. made me want to watch the red violin :P
id love to see that violin, it sounded really beautiful... even though it was ghastly :P anyway
yeee, lovely. mmm snucius

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-27 08:28 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you, sweets :-)

Sometimes the most ghastly things can be beautiful though. Severus is not what I would remotely call handsome, and yet look at how 'compelling' the man is.

[identity profile] marksykins.livejournal.com 2005-08-30 12:39 pm (UTC)(link)
So pretty, for reals. I like the dissonance of the words matching up with the dissonance of Snape's playing. Great, Penny.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-30 10:04 pm (UTC)(link)
Thanks, Marksy :-) That you think this is pretty makes me squee. *G*

[identity profile] scramasaxx.livejournal.com 2005-08-30 01:47 pm (UTC)(link)
well penny, i do not think that any words could really be justice enough as to how elaborate and incredibly well written and thought out this is. i say "fuck" to you in IM and i say it again here, for it is the only word i can offer: fuck. this is amazing. absolutely amazing.

clearly you have incredible skills. incredible. saxx is in awe.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-30 10:06 pm (UTC)(link)
'Fuck' is a good word. I'll gladly take fuck. *G*

And thank you! You've made me blush something terrible :-)

[identity profile] valis2.livejournal.com 2005-08-30 11:28 pm (UTC)(link)
I'm late, as usual, but this piece is so mindbending and dark and deep and lovely that I had to say Wow.

The twist is especially sharp. Awesome.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-31 12:34 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you so much, Valis. That's very kind of you. I'm really glad you liked it :-)

[identity profile] sm-malfoys.livejournal.com 2005-08-31 01:11 am (UTC)(link)
*loves*

Breath taking May I archive this and Red Violin?

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-08-31 07:57 am (UTC)(link)
You may. *G*

Glad you thought this breathtaking. That certainly makes me feel giddy.

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[personal profile] venivincere 2005-09-02 08:29 pm (UTC)(link)
This is such a visceral piece -- especially the description of the violin's restoration! I loved this line: "and what is Severus but an adulterer in dire need of reminding?" The curse is heartbreaking! But I am not sure I understand the Regulus reference...?

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-09-02 09:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Lucius killed Regulus. Strung the violin from his innards.

Get it now? *G*

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[personal profile] cleverthylacine 2005-09-06 06:55 am (UTC)(link)
oh, evil :D

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-09-06 11:48 pm (UTC)(link)
I told you I liked torturing characters. *G*
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[identity profile] storyteller.livejournal.com 2005-09-06 08:34 pm (UTC)(link)
I've had this tab open on my computer since last night, but just now sat down to read it. I'm totally in awe of how you can make such a gruesome act almost poetic. Beautiful piece.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-09-06 11:49 pm (UTC)(link)
Thank you! I had such fun writing yours that I had to do another like it. *G*

[identity profile] fluffyllama.livejournal.com 2005-09-14 11:42 pm (UTC)(link)
Wow, that's chilling and intense, I shivered at the end! Gorgeous.

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-09-15 12:51 am (UTC)(link)
Thanks, Fluffy! I really respect your opinion on this pairing :-)

[identity profile] chaos-rose.livejournal.com 2005-11-25 01:16 am (UTC)(link)
Beautiful, cruel, and intense - fabulous!

[identity profile] themostepotente.livejournal.com 2005-11-26 01:17 am (UTC)(link)
Thank you, m'dear. That's high praise coming from the Queen of Snucius. *G*

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