http://scarletscarlet.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] scarletscarlet.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] themostepotente 2011-04-22 10:53 pm (UTC)

Gorgeous! Lush and detailed and exquisite. One can absolutely see the scenes, and almost *feel* them - you've done an incredible job making it palpable. It was kinda cool how Ariadne had a solid presence in the dreamscapes despite never actually appearing herself.

Btw - a typo (entertainingly appropriate though it is) in the first bit - you've Ariadne's bishop "hallowed-out" instead of "hollowed-out".

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