Oh, this is polished to a fare thee well: each sentence is taut, and the lines almost have a beat to them.
And I loved the role reversal. Snape is often depicted as a skilled cook in fanon, and Harry is of course the fiery one, and I loved how you turned that on its head.
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Date: 2009-07-31 03:19 am (UTC)And I loved the role reversal. Snape is often depicted as a skilled cook in fanon, and Harry is of course the fiery one, and I loved how you turned that on its head.
Very nice ficlet, Penny! Thank you!